How the Internal Memo Became an Organizational Artifact — and What It Reveals About Who Actually Decides

A London financial services firm I’ll call Meridian Capital. Tuesday morning, March. A restructuring memo lands in 2,400 inboxes. Subject line: Organizational Update — EMEA Advisory Division. The body runs 1,186 words — seven paragraphs of context, three bullet points outlining the new structure, a closing line inviting questions to a dedicated HR mailbox. Measured tone. Careful language. And the passive voice doing more work than any single paragraph should bear.

By the time that memo went out, the decision it described had been final for eleven days.

The memo was not the moment of decision. It was the moment of narrative — the organization’s official story about why a restructuring happened, who it affected, what it meant. The actual decision-making had already concluded. Pre-meetings. Corridor conversations. A weekend email thread involving three executives and one external consultant. A single forty-minute call on a Friday afternoon that nobody minuted. The memo retrofitted a rational narrative onto a process that was anything but rational. It was, in every meaningful sense, a justification device dressed up as a communication tool.

This is not unusual. It is, in fact, the primary function of the internal memo in most mid-to-large organizations. And once you start reading memos as archaeological evidence rather than straightforward communication, the gap between what they say and how they were produced becomes the most legible map of informal organizational power available to anyone who cares to look.

The Memo as Post-Hoc Narrative

Organizational scholars have long recognized that formal communications rarely describe how decisions were actually made. Karl Weick’s work on sensemaking established that retrospective rationalization — constructing a coherent story about a decision after the fact — is a core organizational behavior, not an aberration. What gets discussed less often is how the drafting process itself encodes the political architecture that produced the decision.

At Meridian, I traced the memo’s drafting history through interviews with six people involved at various stages. Eleven versions over nine days. Version one was written by a senior associate on the strategy team — a woman in her early thirties who had been given a brief over coffee by the division head. She was not told why the restructuring was happening, only what the new structure should look like. She was not invited to any of the meetings where the restructuring was discussed. She was, in effect, a scribe. Her job was to produce prose that made a predetermined outcome sound like the product of careful analysis.

Versions two through five went to the head of corporate communications, who adjusted the register. Cost-cutting became efficiency programme. Eliminating roles became consolidating functions. A paragraph about positioning for growth appeared — language that had no referent in any document the strategy team had produced. Version six went to legal, who added a sentence about consultation processes that had not, as of that date, actually occurred. Version seven went to the group COO, who deleted two paragraphs acknowledging the contribution of the team being disbanded. Version eight went to the CEO’s chief of staff, who changed the closing from we recognize this is a difficult change to we are confident this positions us for the next chapter.

By the time the memo reached 2,400 inboxes, it bore almost no trace of the process that produced it. That is precisely the point. The memo’s function was not to communicate the decision. It was to erase the decision-making process — to replace the messy, political, half-improvised reality of how organizations actually decide things with a clean narrative of rational adaptation to market conditions.

The external pressures that restructuring memos invoke are, of course, real. Financial services firms operate within trackable economic environments — employment trends, interest rate movements, credit conditions — that create genuine constraints on organizational design. Firms in this sector can be monitored through public economic data platforms such as FRED Economic Data from the Federal Reserve Bank of St. Louis, which provides time series on employment, rates, and financial indicators that contextualize the market pressures firms cite when announcing restructurings. But the memo’s invocation of those pressures is always selective. The memo says: market conditions require us to act. It does not say: we chose this particular response from a range of possible responses, and here is who advocated for each option, and here is why this one won. The market provides the alibi. The politics vanish.

What the Drafting Process Reveals

If you want to understand who holds real authority in an organization, do not read the org chart. Read the version history of a major internal memo.

The org chart tells you who is supposed to decide. The memo’s drafting trail tells you who actually decides — or more precisely, who has the authority to shape how a decision is framed, what gets included, what gets omitted, whose voice is present or absent in the final text.

At Meridian, the drafting trail revealed several things the org chart would not. First: the strategy associate who wrote the first draft had no seat at the decision-making table. She was a producer of language, not a participant in the process the language described. Second: the head of corporate communications had more editorial authority over the final narrative than two of the three division heads whose teams were being restructured. Third: legal had the power to insert claims about processes that had not yet occurred — effectively pre-authorizing the organization’s public commitment to consultation that was, at that point, aspirational. Fourth: the COO’s deletion of the paragraphs acknowledging the disbanded team’s contribution was an act of narrative control. The team was being written out of the organization’s memory before they had even left the building.

Each of these is a data point about informal power. Each is observable. And none of them appear in any official record except the memo’s version history — which, in most organizations, is either not preserved or accessible only to a narrow group.

The distribution list tells a parallel story. At Meridian, the memo went to all EMEA staff but was cc’d only to the executive committee, the heads of HR and communications, and two compliance officers. Notably absent from the cc list: the managers of the teams being disbanded. They received the memo at the same time as everyone else — 2,400 simultaneous recipients — which meant no advance warning, no opportunity to prepare their teams, no chance to frame the change for the people who reported to them. The distribution list was not an oversight. It was a decision about who was trusted with context and who was managed as an audience.

The Lagos–London Contrast: Circulars and the Chain of Authorship

Organizations in different cultural contexts handle the memo function differently, and the contrast is instructive. In Nigerian organizational practice — particularly in government agencies, universities, and large corporations — the formal communiqué, or circular, carries a different relationship to authorship and accountability.

I have observed circulars in Nigerian federal agencies where the chain of authorship is explicit and sequential. The circular names its originator, references the approving authority, cites the internal memorandum number under which the decision was taken, and lists the distribution. The register is more formal than its British corporate equivalent, but the formality is not merely stylistic. It encodes a presumption that authorship matters — that a communication should be traceable to a person, a date, and a delegated authority. The British corporate memo, by contrast, is increasingly authored by no one in particular. It emerges from the organization, in the passive voice, with no named author and no reference to the decision-making process that produced it.

This is not a romantic contrast. Nigerian circulars can be opaque in their own ways — the formality of the register can mask the same political dynamics, and the named author is often a figurehead for a process that happened elsewhere. But the presumption of traceability is structurally different. A circular that names its originator creates at least the possibility of accountability. A memo that emerges from the passive voice of the organization has decided eliminates that possibility by design.

The British corporate memo’s erasure of authorship is, in this light, not a neutral stylistic choice. It is a political technology. When no one authored the memo, no one can be held responsible for its claims. When the decision emerged rather than was made by, the political process that produced it becomes invisible. The passive voice is not just a grammatical construction. It is an accountability structure.

The Regulatory Mirror: Disclosure vs. Internal Narrative

There is an instructive parallel between the internal memo’s narrative function and the external disclosure obligations under which financial services firms operate. Regulatory frameworks require firms to disclose material information to investors and the public — a transparency regime intended to ensure that decisions affecting stakeholders are accompanied by accurate, timely information. The U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission’s Introduction to Investing resource outlines the regulatory environment in which firms must operate, including the principle that investors deserve access to the information necessary to evaluate organizational decisions. The irony: the internal memo — the organization’s primary vehicle for communicating its own decisions to its own people — operates with no comparable transparency obligation. Employees receive a narrative. They do not receive the version history, the drafting trail, the list of who was consulted and who was not, or the record of what was deleted and why. The regulatory framework that governs external disclosure has no internal equivalent. The memo is a disclosure document with no disclosure requirements.

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Reading the Memo as Archaeological Evidence

If the internal memo is a justification device rather than a communication tool, then the useful question is not what does this memo say? but what does this memo reveal about the process that produced it? The answer lives in the omissions, the register, the grammatical choices, the distribution list. Here is a framework for reading the next major internal memo you receive as an organizational artifact rather than a straightforward communication.

First, map the passive voice. Every passive construction in a memo is a decision about agency. It has been decided that obscures who decided. The team will be disbanded obscures who is disbanding it. Following a review obscures who reviewed, when, and on what evidence. The density of passive constructions in a memo is inversely proportional to the organization’s willingness to name its decision-makers. In the Meridian memo, fourteen of twenty-two sentences with decision-related content used passive constructions. That is not a stylistic accident. It is a pattern of agency erasure.

Second, track the omissions. What the memo does not say is more revealing than what it says. The Meridian memo did not mention the external consultant who advised on the restructuring. It did not mention the alternative structures considered and rejected. It did not mention the financial projections underpinning the decision — projections that, according to two people I interviewed, were contested within the strategy team. The absence of these elements is not a failure of communication. It is a curation of narrative.

Third, read the distribution list as a hierarchy of trust. Who received the memo first? Who was cc’d? Who was bcc’d — and does the bcc list exist in a form you can access? Who was excluded entirely, and does the exclusion map to a pattern? At Meridian, the exclusion of the affected team managers from the advance distribution signaled that they were not trusted to manage the narrative — or, more charitably, that the organization had decided to centralize the communication rather than risk inconsistent local framing. Either reading tells you something about the organization’s model of managerial trust.

Fourth, compare the memo’s claims to observable reality. If the memo says following extensive consultation, ask whether you or anyone you know was consulted. If the memo says this decision positions us for long-term growth, ask whether any growth projections were shared. The gap between the memo’s claims and the evidence available to you is itself a measure of the organization’s transparency norms.

Why Documentation Practices Encode Power

There is a broader point here about how documentation practices in organizations encode power relationships. The memo is one artifact in a larger documentary ecosystem — meeting minutes, decision logs, project briefs, strategy decks, performance reviews — each carrying its own relationship to the informal processes it ostensibly describes. In each case, the question is the same: who produced the document, who reviewed it, what was removed, and what does the gap between the document and the process it describes tell you about who holds authority?

Organizations that take documentation seriously as a transparency practice — rather than as a compliance exercise — tend to preserve version histories, name decision-makers explicitly, and make drafting trails accessible. Organizations that use documentation as a narrative control tool tend to produce documents that emerge from no one, in the passive voice, with no traceable connection to the process they describe. The difference is not about the quality of the writing. It is about the organization’s relationship to accountability.

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So What: The Memo Audit

The next time a significant internal memo arrives in your inbox — a restructuring announcement, a strategy update, a change in policy, a leadership transition — do not read it as communication. Read it as evidence. Here is a practical experiment.

Save the memo. Print it if you can. Then, over the following two weeks, try to reconstruct the decision-making process it describes. Ask three colleagues at different levels of the organization what they know about how the decision was made. Ask who was consulted, who was informed, who was surprised. Compare their answers to the memo’s claims. Map the gaps.

Then, if you have access, request the version history. In many organizations, internal memos are drafted in shared documents with visible revision histories. If the history is accessible, trace who made which changes, when, and what was deleted. If it is not accessible, ask why. The answer — or the refusal — is itself a data point about the organization’s transparency norms.

Finally, ask yourself one question: if you were writing the honest version of this memo — the version that described how the decision was actually made, including the pre-meetings, the corridor conversations, the deleted paragraphs, the people who were consulted and those who were not — how different would it be from the version you received? The distance between those two documents is the distance between your organization’s official culture and its lived reality. It is the most precise measurement of the invisible architecture of your workplace that you are likely to encounter on a Tuesday morning.

The internal memo is not a communication tool. It is an organizational artifact. And like all artifacts, it tells you more about the society that produced it than it intends to.

Farah Adebayo is an organizational researcher and the founder of Amen HQ. She studies the material culture of work — the memos, calendars, meeting rituals, and digital traces that make unwritten organizational rules observable.